For my money, getting on is the best part.
Her one fiery eye
slices through the night;
You can feel the fire in her belly,
her black diesel breath is crawling down your nostrils.
The dragon passes.
It’s black; you run alongside; heart kicking madly; you grab hold;
you leave the earth.
The rattle, boom, bang of the big wheel
pounding the rail
is like two lovers’ impassioned kiss,
repeated again and again with ardent fervor,
and forgotten.
from eulogy for a freight train
September 26, 2006 at 4:35 pm
Is this play published? I think it should be. Check out playscripts.com, they might be publishing a play of mine and yours is much much better.